Paragraph anatomy: claim, evidence, analysis
Pick a highlighter, then click each sentence of this paragraph about Poe's “The Tell-Tale Heart” to tag it. Hit Check when you're done.
In “The Tell-Tale Heart,” Poe suggests that guilt can be louder than any outside accusation. When the officers arrive, they sit calmly and chat “of familiar things,” clearly suspecting nothing. Since the police are relaxed, the pressure that finally breaks the narrator can only be coming from inside him. As the visit drags on, he hears the beating grow “louder—louder—louder!” The repetition mimics a pounding pulse, so we feel his panic in the same rhythm he does — and his confession reads as forced by conscience, not by evidence.
Turn on JavaScript to tag the sentences. (Answer: claim, evidence, analysis, evidence, analysis.)
In a session we do this with a printed page and three real highlighters — on the student's own essay. Once they can see the pattern, they can build it.